Tips of writing Body Swapped stories....

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Hey, guys.
I thought of giving you all some tips on writing any stories that contains body swap. When it comes to 2 characters switching bodies to one another, it would be easy to put a * mark with the person's name there so that we will know who the character is from a different body.
For example, if you say Sonic in Amy's body, try saying *Sonic with bold words in the story. That way it won't get us confused. I hope this helps you guys.

Hex and Silver: Body Swap
A silver-white hedgehog playing a game of Blind Man’s Bluff with his rival cobra girl at the backyard of the house.
Silver was blindfolded while keeping his ears perked up to hear the cobra’s movements.
“Hehehe….come on, snake girl. I can’t see but I can hear you” Silver chuckled.
"Good job, Silver. Try to find me" Hex grins.
Silver chuckled and walks around to hear Hex’s movements while being blindfolded.
He heard Hex's footsteps and he pounced her.
"Haha!!! I got you snake girl" Silver laughed. Hex groaned but then chuckled and gets up.
"Nice work, Future boy. Let's take a break" Hex said.
"Sounds good to me. How's Espio anyway?" Silver asked, removing the blindfold off his eyes.
“Doing good. He’s been teaching me some ninja moves which was really fun” Hex said, heading inside her pyramid-like house as Silver followed.
"You seem to have put away the stuff like that made me a cat once" Silver said, thinking of when he was tur
Shadula: Body SwapShadow and Nebula are having a combat practice with against Silver and Blaze outside.
“Whoa!” Shadow ducked from the flame thrower, “Watch it, woman!”
“Sorry, Shadow” Blaze smirked and continues fighting the Ultimate Lifeform.
“Chaos Spear!” Shadow threw his attacks at her but she dodged them.
Silver was flying after Nebula in the sky. The blue-violet hedgehog threw her purple energy blasts at him but he dodges them from left and right.
"Get back here!" he shouted playfully.
Nebula stuck her tongue out and flies to the clouds, “Can’t catch me, future boy!”
Silver flew after her but didn’t notice that she was behind him and she tackled Silver down to the ground.
She got off of him and back flips, “Show me what you got, Silver” she smirked as she got in her fighting stance, motion her finger to come here.
Shadow blocks all of Blaze’s attacks and does a butterfly kick, knocking her down but she quick
SilvAmy: Body SwapA pink hedgehog sitting on the bench by herself, feeling depressed that her blue hero is with that Knothole princess. She tried so hard to show her feelings to him but he rejects it like trash and it hurt her really bad. There was no point to love him anymore since her heart is broken into pieces.
“Sonic was my true love. But now he chose her over me. I guess…..*sobs*….I should move on…..” Amy sobs quietly, tears streaming down her cheek like a waterfall.
Her ears perked at the sound of someone sobbing from the distance. She gets up and follows the sound, it was getting louder which means she’s close by to who is crying. Amy saw a male white hedgehog sitting at the edge of the cliff staring at the sunset alone.
“Silver?”
His ears perked, looked over his shoulder to see the sakura hedgehog. He sighs sadly and looks away, staring at the sunset, trying to hush his sobs but no success.
“What….are you…..*sobs*….do
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KyuubiCore's avatar
That is actually a really good idea xD I actually have a body swap story, I will do this right now OwO